Inspiration

by Scott Killen on July 14, 2008

You stand before me,
cat­a­clysmic sur­vivor
cal­lously unspent.

I can only watch in won­der,
your tears turn­ing to dia­monds
your cries to song.

You have become the cre­ator
fash­ion­ing rhyth­mic sinew
from your own blood.

Your verse walks
touch­ing all who see
with celes­tial vision.

You rise,
beat­ing back the pain
strug­gle relent­ing to smile.

You speak,
honey drips like dew
words becom­ing my gos­samer wings.

I bloom.

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nunyaa July 15, 2008 at 12:41 am

This one is tugging at my heart, emotional and all powerful.

Beaman July 15, 2008 at 5:42 am

This is a fascinating piece. Would I be right in seeing some allegory to Christ in this poem?

As Nunyaa said, very powerful and a cauldron to the emotions.

Scott July 15, 2008 at 8:29 am

nunyaa and Beaman,

Thank you for commenting on the poem and making me feel welcome to the Poetry Prompt!

Beaman, you are right. I was hoping to seed that with just a few words and see if that grew in the reader’s mind. I am glad it did. Thank you for the feedback!

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